mematron's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[MSTIKE Case]

Very cool, hey Kel :)

[The Blood Jungle]

Very beautiful work. I only wish that you had a ton more color and value changes in it because it's very impressionistic.

[Demon Counselor]

No, you still have work to do like:

Demon Pimp
Demon Barista
Demon Mall Cop
Demon Meteorologist
Demon Taxi Driver
Demon Bike Messenger
Demon Tatoo Artist

ArtDeepMind responds:

:D I think that demon tattoo artist would make a great illustration

[Fubuki 11]

The shadows on her deltoids are too harsh to make her upper body look like it's being worn like a necklace. Her abs and obliques need a real reference.

I think you should slow down and go for the longer illustrations. That will allow you to develop your value, form and focus on anatomy. Life models are the way to go!

After all, you're doing a lot of naked and half-naked figures. When you aren't on point it's more obvious than an alien or fantasy creature.

[Space Madness]

I love this. It reminds me of, "Ren and Stimpy"

[Zombified]

You're telling to grab my sac and open wide? You naughty, NAUGHTY little crumpet O_o

[Birthday Boy]

This is a messed up illustration. I love it!

TheMarooned responds:

hahah it was a birthday present for my girlfriend

[Seperation]

I love this. One of those pieces that's instantly understood.

MacOFlannigan responds:

I'm glad you like it! I really appreciate the high praise.

[The Candle on the skull]

Skulls as well as others parts of a skeleton are porous and yet you used a skin texture in this rendering. The skull looks soft instead of a strong mass. You always have to reference life even if it's exaggerated.

deafguitarist063 responds:

I didn't used a skin texture. I used the crack or shatter texture but on the low opacity. I thought it look almost like the skull texture but I guess i need to learn more on the texture part and improve on that. Thanks for your great tip